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The old war, a new generation. With the defeat of Avatar Aang, and of Ozai\'s airfleet, each nation is left vunerable. A new avatar has been born into the water tribes, and must restore balance to the world before it is engulfed in chaos.
 
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 Dachou of the Nushi(Done)

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PostSubject: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeFri Apr 15, 2011 6:47 pm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Basic Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Dachou Nushi

Alias (optional): Blaze, X, Brosideon

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Bending Power: Fire FTW

Allegiances: He currently holds no affiliation with any Tribes, except his Grandma, he has to..

Blood Type(Optional): O..?

Family Members(Optional): His Grandma, his little sister

Birth Date(Optional):

Star Sign(Optional): Libra

Extra Information: He has a flyong lemur named Bart.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Appearance:Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Gin3

Height: 6 foot 2 inches

Weight: 164 lbs

Body Type: Slender, tall, but well buiilt muscles

Extra Feature: He has a scar running down his back, and is quite skilled with a sword, Kai, and Staff

Voice: Soothing, naturally loud, and it sounds kinda like Zuko

Extra Clothing/Gear: He usually wears a sleevless brown shirt, nad has a pack slung around his hsoulder. The pack containes some medicine, a bit of dried tea, cookies, and a watch.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personality:

Likes: Food, Tea, Ramen, Girls, Standing up for others, Talking, Crowds. Massages

Dislikes: Being oppressed, being put down, Haters, People who are to serious. (He is like a little Iroh xD) and unnecassary Violence

Goals: To learn all the different types of bending

Fears: To die alone, to be Trapped in one specific place

Strength:Loyal, Easy going, Couragous, Strong, Honorable, Good sense of Humor

Weakness:Stubborn, over Protective, Somewhat lazy when wanting to, a pervert

Extra Information:He enjoys swimming, despite being a Firebender, and hungers to know Waterbemding out of anything else.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

History:Dachou was born in the middle of the Fire nation, in a wealthy family. His mother died at his birth, and his father was rarely in the hoise. He was than taken into custody of his Grabdparents, whom fought long and hard with his father. After winning, Dachou soon realized how big of a mistake it was, wanting to live in their house. His grandfather and grandmother fought constantly, and Dachou was always right in tge middle of it.

Being a hardcore, 'Fire nation is da bomv' kind of Person, his grandmother forbid him of befriending or even talking to people of other nations. But of course, Dachou rebelled. He usually spent most of his time drawing out landscapes and venturing around the Fire Nation, looking at his fellow civilians, thirsting for adventure. One day, while drawing the Fire Nation Palace, he came across a stray, injured, flying lemur. Not wanting it to feel any pain, he tried bandaging it up best he could, and cared for it in a concealed alleyway until it healed fully. After that, Dachou began callig him hs pet and the Lemur followed him everywhere. When he came of age, Dachou told his Grandmother that he was travrling the world. After a long arguement, she grudhingly aggreed, only under the condition that he wrote whenever possible. Now, Dachou is traveling the countrys and trying to adapt to his surroundings, and meet as mamy new people as possible.


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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeSat Apr 16, 2011 12:22 am

fears is incomplete it seems,looks like you got cut off, still need to put his strengths, weaknesses, extra info, and history before it can be approved. Also I like the Gin idea, stick with the white hair it will look cooler than black in my opinion Smile read other profiles if you need help with the rest of your bio or feel free to pm me, and welcome
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeTue Apr 19, 2011 8:09 pm

Ah, my goid man, i put WIP in the title for a reason xD

Means Work In Progress if ya didnt catch on, but tganks anyways lol
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeTue Apr 19, 2011 11:57 pm

ooooh lol
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeWed Apr 20, 2011 6:56 pm

Yep, ika bump this topic when im done with my app, so take a look Very Happy

Anyways, Bumps
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 7:58 am

You need more history - at least 2-3 paragraphs
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 1:36 pm

Edited I belive.

Also, for future refrences, how long is the minimum of what you would call a paragraph?
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PostSubject: Re: Dachou of the Nushi(Done)   Dachou of the Nushi(Done) Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 9:19 pm

Just a few sentences - basically we just need history on more than one event in his life.

But this is fine, approved.
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